Forget about piecing it together, let’s take it apart!



Here’s my thinking

If students are to become great writers they have to understand how great writers write. We spend a lot of time asking students to put writing together, but we rarely ask them to take writing apart so they can see what how it became the great writing that it is.  During our writing PLC  I challenged a group of teachers to take the plunge with me and  discuss our findings.

We decided to take it apart

We chose a news article from newsela, an amazing site that provides you with the most up to date news articles, and allows you to choose the lexile level at which you would like to read the article. We chose an article on Syrian refugees and literally cut it into parts. We separated the headings, subheadings, paragraphs and pictures, in an attempt to look at what this author did that made his article powerful.

Our Findings

We began by looked at  the first thing that jumped out to most of us. Teachers commented  on what we could learn from the title and subtitles. We also discussed the impact of  pictures on our understanding of the text.  But then it got really good! Some teachers started discussing how the article, while appearing to be an informational article, used many subtle (and some not so subtle) techniques to assist the reader in forming a very specific opinion.  That sparked a discussion about word choice which had us cutting out all of words used that were subliminally creating a specific image in the reader’s mind. This sparked more discussion! Teachers cut out different sentence types and examined how many of each type were used. We ended up with piles and piles of words, paragraphs, sentence types and pictures! This was an article taken apart, and apart, and apart.

More practice

It went so well that I decided to do the same exercise with a small group of students I was working with. The conversations were amazing! Students were able to see different writing strategies more clearly and discuss the impact of the author choosing these writing techniques.  They were excited and wanted to  apply some of the things they learned from this author into their own writing.

My takeaway

Sometimes you have to take writing apart to really understand how carefully it is put together.  Let students get messy with the writing they way we allow children to get messy with finger paint.  Let them tear the writing apart, analyze it, learn from it and finally apply what they learned to their own writing.



The impact of teaching students to truly engage with literature

An 8th grade student was reading “The Bluest Eye” by Toni Morrison and decided to use sticky notes to assist her in her questioning of what she would later come to identify as one of several central themes in the novel.  What was fascinating to me  was that this was not an assigned book. This was a book she chose to read. These were her sticky notes, not notes that her teacher made her take, or a class assignment. This was her questioning, synthesizing and interpreting what she was reading.
wpid-20150929_121341.jpgI saw her with this book and asked about her notes. We discussed what she was thinking, how she got answers to the questions she had, and what she thought about Pecola Breedlove and her obsession with blue eyes. The discussion was rich and I was inspired. I was inspired because I wasn’t a teacher talking to an 8th grade student in that moment. We were two people discussing a literary work that I have read many times, yet never interpreted in some of the ways that she did. I was inspired because in that moment I knew that she was thinking deeply about the text.

Close reading is a way of interacting with texts in order to gain a deeper understanding, examine the author’s word choice, draw conclusions and question what you believe based on what the author has presented in her literary work.

We never know how our instruction will impact our students in their every day lives. When I sat down and talked with this student I though about our bigger purpose as educators. As educators we are responsible for giving students tools that will expand their world and help them reach way beyond our own understanding. Our purpose is to teach our students to be better  more critical thinkers than we were at their age.